Submitting

Introduction:
SUBMITTING
The riding crop
The cat-o-nine tails
The pexi-glass flogger
I deserve to be punished
By any means
You deem
Needed
The shame
The guilt
The torment
I must make myself feel this way
For ever being happy before
You entered my
Life
The collar
The restraints
The leash
Control me and force me
To submit to all
Of your dominating
Demands

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anonymous readerReport

2012-06-22 16:14:17
You can submit to as many diceotrries and article diceotrries in one day. The more you do, the faster your link can be displayed. It’s not how many articles you submit in a day, it’s where you submit them to. The same thing with web diceotrries. Why submit your information to a website with a lower page rank or equivalent page rank as your website. You want to increase your page rank as well. Submit to sites with a page rank higher than yours.

Anonymous readerReport

2009-10-30 16:56:21
u disagree in the last 2 comments i thought they were ever so true and loving poems

Anonymous readerReport

2009-06-21 12:31:56
The pace is the part that kills almost any good poem…

Anonymous readerReport

2009-02-26 20:50:57
I will cover your eyes
and lay you down,
because it pleases me

I will touch your face
and kiss your neck,
because it pleases me

I will tie your hands
and collar your throat,
because it pleases me

i will raise your hips
and thrash you with my crop,
because it pleases me

I will then spread your legs
and bring you to ecstasy,
because it pleases me
to please you!

greg brown


BlackGoddessReport

2008-07-09 10:53:53
this is dumb